Group: First Rough Cut

We showed the class a rough cut of what we had edited so far and they gave us some feedback of what they thought.

Feedback from class:

• The rooftop location is very relevant and works really well with our concept, especially the shot with the plastic graffitied tunnel.
• The tracking shot at the beginning was very effective at positioning the audience with the main character and creating an enigmatic atmosphere.
• One of their favourite shots was the pull focus of his hand on the edge.
• There was a good mixture of shots and angles and wide range of distances.
• The establishing shot we included does not fit with the stylised aesthetic.